sororcula

I meant it in a good way! Um. Yeah, I may need to edit my post. *facepalm* I meant, uh, kicked my literary ass. Like, uh, made it a thousand times BETTER. Wow, how did I not realize how badly that was worded? Also:

And I would have betaed, only I don't see anything that needs fixing.

I think you're lying. :-P